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Post by TIGERA on Mar 17, 2010 20:47:05 GMT -5
Well, since I like poem making so much, and this community seems friendly, I decided to post some of my better works here. Please don't distribute them anywhere or claim as your own, especially the first one, as I made it for some specially. Comments and criticisms are greatly appreciated.
This poem I made on my mother's request for my grandmother. She just passed away a few days ago and we were all sad to see her leave. I'm e-mailing it to her later, so don't redistribute it.
The sun has set
The day has past
There is but one thing
That will last.
Our undying love
Shall go on.
The only thing
That hath shone.
Comforting gestures
Fleeting smiles
They don’t know how much it hurts
To hear excuses.
“It was her time,
Her time to go.”
Though I don’t believe it so.
We will go on
Our hearts shall mend
We must hope
That god will send
More time to spend.
Loving, trusting, living.
More on the way soon! (Well, if my muse permits. It may be months.) |
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